SP Fanfiction

I'm writing this on my iPad so please excuse me if some stuff doesn't sound/look right. Also, I have just started reading the Hunger Games trilogy. They are AMAZING! I highly suggest you read them, they are a fantastic read. Anyway, on with the fanfiction!

Her clothes were soaked but the rain hurtled down relentless and unforgiving making her dark hair stick to her pale face. The twigs snapped loudly as her feet pounded against the ground. Fatigue was starting to set in, she'd been running non-stop for hours now because she knew that if she paused for even the slightest amount of time, she knew she would be a goner.
There was one place she could only hope she would be excepted, Elysium Asylum. The only question was whether she could make it.

I know, i know it was short. I just wanted your opinion on whether I should continue or not.

Jaffa xx